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　托福獨立寫作開頭錯誤分析

　　好的托福寫作開頭可以為你的文章增色不少，但是如果你的托福作文開頭不僅不出色，而且還放下大錯誤，這樣不僅會影響考官對你的印象，也會影響到你的托福作文。今天就跟大家分享的就是托福寫作錯誤開頭的整理，希望對大家的復習有所幫助。

　　托福寫作失敗開頭1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

　　修改方案：開門見山 直奔主題

　　In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。 Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replac the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (托福)

　　Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life. Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

　　托福寫作失敗開頭二：中式英文人見人暈

　　典型失敗案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

　　Topic 2- The population problem The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

　　Topic 3- Is there fairness in today’s business world? I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

　　托福寫作失敗開頭三：觀點模糊態(tài)度曖昧

　　典型失敗案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married? I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

托福寫作黃金40句

　　1. It must be pointed out that it is one of our basic State policies tocontrol population growth while raising the quality of the population.

　　2. It is (has been) estimated that the world's population could reach 6billion by the end of the century.

　　3. It must be kept in mind that there is no secret of success but hardwork.

　　4. It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world wecannot overcome.

　　5. As is known man is the product of labour.

　　6. It is a common saying that man who has a settled purpose will surelysucceed.

　　7. It is clear that the enemy has no desire for peace.

　　8. It is hard to imagine how Edison managed to work twenty hours eachday.

　　9. It's hard to say whether the plan is practicable.

　　10. There is no doubt that you will be helped by others if you have anydifficulties.

　　11. It seems certain that they have made a series of experiments.

　　12. It is said that bats have been using radar for millions of years.

　　13. To tell the truth , many mistakes we made could have been avoided.

　　14. As we know, it was not until recently that the problem was solved.

　　15. It must be admitted that you haven't done what you promised to do.

　　16. In my opinion, this computer is different from that one you saw.

　　17. It is certain that we have a long way to go.

　　18. All this shows that nothing can prevent us from reaching our aims.

　　19. As far as we know, it took him more than a year to write the book.

　　20. It has been proved that every substance, no matter what it is, is madeup of atoms.

　　21. It has been decided that we are going to build a railway whose basemust be completed within this year.

　　22. It is obvious (evident) that the success of the innovation depends onour concerted efforts.

　　23. To be frank, whether you like it or not, you have no other choice.

　　24. It is natural that one may have trouble expressing complicated ideas insimple English.

　　25. What is more important, the agreement they have negotiated is beingcarried out.

　　26. We will be successful as long as we persevere.

　　27. Frankly speaking, what you call the truth may not apply to thingshappening here.

　　28. It is true that we must redouble our efforts; otherwise we cannot catchup with the developed countries.

　　29. I take it for granted that they will support this idea.

　　     I regard it as natural that they will agree to this idea.

　　30. In a certain sense, a successful scientist is a person who is neversatisfied with what he has achieved.

　　31. The oceans do not so much divide the world as unite it.

　　32. There is no denying the fact that the new management method has greatlyincreased the production.

　　33. There is no denying the fact that the new management method has greatlyincreased the production.

　　34. Upon hearing the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he couldn'tutter a word.

　　35. As the saying goes, nothing in the world is difficult for one who setshis mind to it.

　　36. Our goal must be attained. Our goal can unquestionably be attained.

　　37. Noting can prevent us from realizing the four modernizations.

　　38. Now in China, more and more families can afford to buy high-gradegoods, such as washing machines, TV sets, videocorders.

　　39. No matter how difficult English may be, you should do your best tolearn it.

　　40. It can be said that without knowledge of science and technology, it isimpossible to build socialist modernizations.

培森教育告訴你如何在托福獨立寫作中獲

　　在托福寫作中如何可以取、馬到呢?俗話說：知己知彼，百戰(zhàn)不殆。我們首先應當搞清楚的是托福官希望看到什么樣的作文，那么，我們就應該從并且的標準入手，即托福作文的評分標準。托福作文的評分標準主要包括四項：，寫作任務完成情況;第二，連貫與;第三，詞匯豐富程度;第四，語法多樣性及準確性。評分標準在手，我們就可以勇闖托福作文關了，下面，本文會和大家一起分享四個托福寫作策略，希望可以對大家有所幫助。

　　，寫作任務用詞表達要地道

　　有時，同學們在寫文章的時候會絞盡腦汁想一些自己認為比較的表達方式，比如說下面這句話：The scientists’ work pushes our living standard to a higher level.該句想表達的是“科學家的工作推動我們的生活水平達到了一個更高的水平”，但細細品來，中國式英語味道還是很足，那么，我們該如何糾正完善呢?給大家一個參考，我們可以說 The scientists’ work upgrades our daily life. upgrade有“升級，改善”的意思，在這個地方可以表示我們的生活水平有所。

　　第二，避免重復表達

　　我們還是用例子來說明這個策略：One of the things that fascinates us most about mobile phones is the popular belief that mobile phones not only provide us with entertainment, but we can use mobile phones to contact other people.這個句子從總體上表達還是很不錯的，但是卻有一個美中不足的缺點，mobile phones這個詞重復出現(xiàn)了三次，我們有兩個辦法可以避免這個錯誤，是用代詞they或them代替，第二是用cell phones這些同義詞進行替換，這樣，讀起來就沒有那么拖沓重復了。

　　第三，關聯(lián)句子要破鏡重圓

　　很多時候，同學們寫了好幾個句子，但是由于忽略了這些句子之間存在的關聯(lián)，會讓讀者覺得文章的內(nèi)容有些破碎，比如下面這句話：Biogas plants are a clean and economical way of producing vast amounts of urgently needed energy. Local residents are supposed to be willing to put up with them. 這兩句話是有關聯(lián)的，所以我們可以很巧妙的用一個定語從句將原句改為：Biogas plants are a clean and economical way of producing vast amounts of urgently needed energy, which local residents are supposed to be willing to put up with. 于是乎，意思表達得完整了，句子的難度也增加了，一舉兩得，何樂而不為呢?

　　第四，邏輯聯(lián)結(jié)詞要刻骨銘心

　　在托福作文中，邏輯表達一定要清晰連貫，于是，我們就離不開一些地道好用的邏輯連接詞的幫助了。比如，表示“，首先”，我們可以用first and foremost/ in the first place;表示“第二，其次”，我們可以用in addition/ furthermore/ what is more;表示“后”，可以用last but not least/ in the final analysis;表示“總而言之”，可以用in a nutshell/ to sum up。當然，也很鼓勵同學們自己去總結(jié)一些好用喜歡的邏輯關聯(lián)詞。

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長期以來，培森教育一直致力于出國外語培訓及語言學習產(chǎn)品研發(fā)，與此同時，利用其豐富的教育資源及與國外學術間的良好關系，積極推動中國教育和文化界與的合作與交流。杭州培森教育總部位于杭州市中心武林商圈，由教育及專業(yè)管理團隊聯(lián)合海內(nèi)外的精英組創(chuàng)。

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